beta
love the art style.. I know this is a short story but i didn’t expect this to have that much of a plot hole.. especially for like the last 8 chapters. they suddenly make up? just like that? and Al majorly made his appearance only to cry.. donggeul come and go and i was like ‘is he ded or not’. and who tf is the twin and the 2 sunbae (maybe they will cover it up in the side story? idk).. their relationship is very very confusing.. idk whats going on in suhyeon’s head either.. overall the plot is good for like 15 chapters