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Hmm

Just finished reading this and I'm not so sure what to feel about it. It's not bad but there's just so many holes in the story. I had to skip some of the smexy part cause it gets boring and I want more of the plot. The author decided to add more smexy scenes than focusing on the storyline so.. a little disappointing.

Overall the story is okay just that it gets boring after awhile. The ending scene is a little meh to me cause like.. so sudden lol