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Ok. Arts Gorgeous. That's a given. The characters? Kinda badly written. The two maids barely have presence, the 2nd in command hasn't had screentime in a while. The characters all look the same except colors, no one has a distinct style to help differentiate. The only character with any distinct personality is that flower b*tch. ML has trauma, but he's way to back and forth, and not in an enjoyable way. It's like Author wants us to get doki dokis at some scenes, and then just excuses it as "ML runs hot and cold".

FL is the most irritating because she's at the very least 1 or 2 hundred years old, but she DOESN'T act like it. She's also somehow both incredibly powerful yet ALWAYS being defeated or saved by ML, and sometimes the story will try and explain why she lost, but it always feels like such a cop out.

This all makes the plot seem incredibly boring, because in the grand scheme of the story, they got married, fought 2nd in commands yokai, went to capital, and that's it. Like, ML also has like zero motivation, at first he wants to avoid politics and then he throws it away for fl?? Even for love at first sight that's a ridiculous thing to do. Sister needs to be healed but she has a baby, ok, why can't they, idk, fake sisters death and leave the capital? They stay, and they're like I need a reason to stay, and somehow her reviving snow magic is enough of a reason?

Also the like, suspense behind the king and his followers doesn't even work, cause it's just them standing around smirking and looking hot.

There's nothing pushing the reader to want to uncover the plots or follow the characters.

Again, I know there are worst stories, but idk, I always can at least handle shitty basic stories because they all follow tropes and those tropes work, even if they are basic. Like they use a basic character and at least it's a full character just kinda basic and boring, FL and ML just feel like pretty designs doing things without any logic or reasoning


Even MLs trauma isnt very fleshed out because it's like it's there one moment and gone the next.

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I have definitely read dumb fl stories and Olga is not that dumb. Like she was manipulated and gaslit by her ex and killed, but as shown by her being hurt knowing he was cheating for YEARS, she still holds some faith in him. From her pov Sergio killed her accidentally, there is no way she'd think that he'd toss Olga the 2nd of the balcony in cold blood. The last time, she was provoking him, threatening to use the goddesses gift against him. Also, he's the actual dumb fuck in this situation, he needs the goddess prayer bs, and he tossed the saintess off the balcony??? Also also, Olga KNOWS he needs Olga 2 alive for the prayers, so again, that's another point for she wouldn't expect him to be that dumb and bloodthirsty. This mistake is not an unreasonable one to make. This all happened quickly after her death, so cut her some slack.

She's honestly pretty level headed and proactive compared to similar stories, even her failure at the second chance of life, is less because she failed, and more that again, Sergio is a complete illogical wild card. Regrouping to attempt and secure the dutchy untill she figures out their next move MAKES SENSE. There was no possible way to even assume he'd just, murder his brother like that.

She's told point blank by Ath that she needs to HEAVILY focus on revenge, showing her how twisted and crazy Sergio is, which is information she should have known from the begining if she was truly supposed to succeed. She knew he'd cause a blood bath, but she probably assumed it was because he'd make a stupid king, not because he's actually a homicidal maniac. Like a crime of passion that's and accident is way different than systematically hunting down and killing your family and political rivals. Like you could argue the goddess should have shown Olga this information, but realistically, if the goddess already had such a harsh punishment from turning back time, she probably tried to do as much as she could within already breaking rules. It makes more sense that knowledge of other timelines is actually aths domain.

Like, characters acting like humans always seem to equal "weak" or "dumb" but like, we are looking in at these stories with perfect vision on the motives and mechanizations behind any mistakes. I honestly find this story to be a lot more down to earth than a lot of these stories usually tend to be. Also FL making mistakes and learning from them is so much more entertaining than perfect everyone loves me FLs.

Anyways, I really hate that no one seems to be giving this story a chance
It's actually super cute, and there are some plot points that are really new. Also Sergio the main villain is fucking insane and he has surprised me at every turn. It's not often we get stupid AND bloodthirsty.

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I'm so invested in the plot, but also the sex is so great.

ML is low-key the weakest part of this story, so it makes sense he's getting hate.

Author should have waited before introducing him, in my opinion. Give him more time to develope as a character or something. Great story otherwise

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