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I like OP characters, so that's not my problem, but I just find it so incredibly irritating how the whole world revolves around Aryn. Why did literally all of her friends need to be alive for her in some shape or form? Some of them should be allowes to just rest in piece. I also find it fucked up how Jamil's great-grandson just ceased to exist so she could just continue living in his body with her memories, without it ever being acknowledged that his life was essentially overwritten.
I always cut stories some slack in the beginning, because they can improve as they go, so I noticed way too late how juvenile the plot is. The author tries to do political intrigue and fails so hard she has to kill the princess off quickly and unceremoniously and make the story about super powerful demons instead, whose powers function the same way hers do: super OP, but at the same time, easy to defeat.
I called MC OP earlier too, but really she needs constant saving whenever it's convenient for her to be powerless.
Another thing that bothers me is how Aryn is like: "Oh, now it makes sense that I was able to love you unconditionally, you're my biological child!" That's kinda fucked up lmao. Just indirectly admitting that she would love an adopted child less.
I would've preferred if this had stayed a fluffy surface level family story about them raising a strange child with occasional interference from the imperial family. The kind of plot we currently have would've needed a better writer.
I still recommend this story to people who like to read uncritically, it's kinda fun when you turn your brain off completely!
I have a hard time doing that, so I tend to have less fun in general :(