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I get what the author is trying to imply in this story but unfortunately it didn’t translate well, mostly due to the pacing of this, so everything feels rushed. We don’t get a timeline of how long Lily was staying at the mansion, so we never really get to see Lily be more than just a naive mc or how the relationship between her and the duchess could’ve been built up naturally. We at least get an understanding of Anna on how she feels she’s not worthy of being with lily because her childhood trauma. And it’s not like this author can’t make a good gl I love “Finding Assistant Manager Kim” it’s such a good office romance story.
Whereas this deals with pacing issues, so now it just seems like Lily is all wishy washy between two women.