
wow...... i have no words. I- this- just WOW!!! This story is so unbelievably BEAUTIFUL!!!!! Pacing is great. Character delvelopment makes sense. The jokes are funny. The relationship bonds are so cute. All major plot holes are closed at the end. The art is nice and fluid. Even the toxic love the main characters have make sense. Theres nothing that feels too out of place.
This story is just all together AMAZING!!! I have no complaints at all. Author should be very proud of their work because there team did an awsome job with this story! Round of applause to everyone!

Ian needs to pick a side. He need to either break it off with both of them or choose 1. Just because hes not offically dating one of them doesn't mean that sleeping with another man isnt wrong. He KNOWS sleeping with other people hurts BOTH of the love insterst yet he still does it! At this point Ian needs to just run away and work on himself before one of those 2 boys end up dieing in vain for him.
Me personally I perfer Ian and TJ together because Jo deserves better. Jo just wants normal love and Ian wants a normal Life but HE CANT HANDLE A NORMAL LIFE SINCE HES NEVER HAD ONE BEFORE. Ian needs to just let Jo go instead of leading him on so he can move on and find another love because im SICK of Ian corrupting that boys heart!¡!
Tj was right when he said that hes the only one that can handle Ian. That boy has the mental forditude of a tank because hes willing to lowkey destroy everything just for a man that dont want him. Like Ian knew that Tj was in love with him and hes going to sit here and play the victom when YOU are the one munipluating his feelings so that HE becomes more and more obessed with YOU. AND YOU LIKE THAT HES OBESSED WITH YOU!!!
Moral of the story is the only thing thats keeping me from strangling Ian is the fact that hes very pretty

I feel sick after reading this but it oddly beautiful.
Hurt people hurt people.
Mc is the victim of sexual abuse so he craved to have his only fam members go through the same pain as him. After raping his brother he now numb and wants to feel agony for what he's done but also wants to feel love form another human that isn't backhanded

Loved it.... until INCEST BECAME THE MAIN PLOT!! THEY ARE SIBLING WHY ARE THEY HAVING BABIES TOGETHER

They’re not siblings though, that’s just what you want to believe. Neither of them saw each other as siblings and aren’t siblings by law. She has her own actual brother who isn’t him. His family just took her in and took care of her when she didn’t have anywhere to go as a kid. Plus the description should’ve said that it was gonna be romance between them lmao
Its surprisingly a very nice story. I love how much the characters struggle. They have a purpose to fight
besides just getting stronger and thats to just simply survive as a unit. Author has a clear understanding of how to write bonds between comrades that doesnt disturb the respect of the chain of command. The characters love eachother (some... mostly party 1,2,3) but understand that the weak will die or fall behind.
I love how over powered they are compared to regular humans but how weak they are too monsters. It makes it enjoyable to watch them grow because they seriosly cant beat the enemy in front of them by their selves. AND THE CAST KNOWS THAT, Thats why they stick with one another, the more battles the fight the deeper their dependance on eachother is and the deeper their bond grows. They grow individally yes, but the whole party gets stronger as time moves on. Author clearly understands how to write to give a character purpose, for each hero has theyre own motivations that the author can cheer them on for.
Art style is consistant and pleasent. Love how almost everyone has a tiny wait. Some fight get boring inbetween so i just skimmed them went it gets repeditive but besides that no complains. Its ovi that the creator of thus story knows what they are doing and are skilled in the knowlodge of rpg games for this story just sucks you into there world at times.
No real complants. No major hints of harems. The cast joke around and ship the MC with a few character for fun but he shuts that down quickly. Its a wonderful story with lots of potential. Keep up the good work cant wait to see this grow!