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Ok, I think the overall plot is quite good, but the storytelling of the adventure to getting to the end is a bit... amateur? It's a nice, little politics-focused story where challenges are thrown every chapter. But the characters and many plots kinda lean on the childish/simple side which kinda strips away the charm of the main plot.

Anyway, there are some not fun parts, but overall it's ok.