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This started good, but it was rushed at the end. Also, the FL having 3 previous husbands from her past was interesting. But it was honestly hard to tell ages of ppl, except for the FL and the main ML. Idk. I do think her power is unique and cool, and used well. However it just fell short the closer it got to the ending. The romance is very much the subplot, fyi. She is a kid for a while in the story too, which is meh.