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Alright I powered through all 8 chapters and yeah the art is serving but the story ain't.
First off the whole "oh I'm dreaming, I can do whatever" only kinda works when it's in thoughts only, I mean how many times did each of them say "I'm dreaming" and gee I wonder why the other person suddenly starts acting sketchy around me in real life?
Not connecting the obvious dots is driving me up a wall and is frankly just bad writing....speaking of bad writing, is it the translation or do most of the conversations make absolutely no sense.
Edit: Saw the comments on here and it's Paradise Scans, go figure.
First the friend suggests Mc and Brother go well together and then in a flashback he's called a pedophile, pick one?
Now onto the one thing I did enjoy, I like a twisted Top, not this one but generally a kind looking and gentle Top who turns out to be a bit messed up in the head.
It tickles that part of my brain that is also into masochistic Tops ya know.
I wonder why I even bothered reading this, probably because of the art and honestly I'll stick around either actually reading or skimming through for the art.