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Not every story has to be in depth emotional poetic dramatic symbolic etc etc with intricate storyline or compelling plot or whatever.
Sometimes some of us just want to read
something light and not emotionally heavy and have a little giggle.
Trying to act you're better than other people "why does this have high rating?" "This story could've been better" "this had so much potential to be good" is bullshit
It's good as it is. If u don't like it, then u are not the intended audience.