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I just got turned off from the 5th chapter on, I didn't think it'd be complete extortion and misery. I usually don't care if something is toxic because I can get over those parts, but she completely abused and endoctrinated him, I couldn't even ignore it. The smut was ok if you were able to ignore the rape, how miserable the guy was and how disturbing she was. The story had some potential, there are some great religious sexual stories. Had it only been that then it would've been okay..