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I have mixed feelings. It's rly interesting, and I'm curious to see how everything plays out, but there's also a few plot holes that are bugging me, and it feels a little bit rapey. Not too much, but it's still there.
For the plot holes tho, what's the point of killing the original when you can't be his doppelganger? You look nothing alike, there's no takin his place. And wasn't he his first creation? So how come there's another one that appears to be older?