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By any chance, can you spend the night with me?...
The author seems a little confused about what is positive and straitfoward. First of all, the whole story just happens because of the girl lack of self esteem. At the beginning of the story, the girl is turned down around four times. Each time she cheers up herself to keep on going, because the guy "just needs a little more reasoning". If she loved herself, she wouldn't go after him after the second rejection, honestly. Then, the author would make him apologize or work with the plot by putting them together in a situation. To me, it could be a cute story if the author knew how to work with the plot without making Yuna's lack of self esteem the whole plot. I say the whole plot because, again, ask yourself: if she had listen all the "no", would the romance happen?