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Okay ~ first things first.. i love the story..
But i thot the FL will be OP since she has the 'book'.
Also, everything could have been sorted out if they just communicate more.. i mean they all know that they're from a different world.. so they should be more cautious ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Also, the FL at first I thought she will lead and strong and can defend her own by the book and as the author she should know everything about her work if she really... Haiiist this made me really frustrated at some point
Anyways ~ Kyte for the win! From the start to end, he's the true protagonist (づ￣ ³￣)づ