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I reread all of it and the pacing is really off? At most jaekyung knows about Dan's grandma and that he's a physical therapist and that he's kind to the point that hes kind of a pushover and he's suicidal(?) or Hella depressed. It feels kinda of weird? Or wrong? For him to act like Dan is his whole life now from those things alone. He knows only superficial things about Dan and he's all like "I never cared about anyone until now but I'd throw all those wins away for you" or some shit but because of the pacing those feelings feel like they just came out of nowhere???
I can't believe I glazed this series so much before it's pretty dogshit