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So the top definitely has some shitty points to his personality, but that bottom in the first chapter was just ugh. Straight up starfished during sex and then had the audacity to tell the top that he was trying his best. Trying his best at what? His Patrick impression???? Pft
Also, are there ANY stories where the chubby bottom stays chubby??? Sure I like the ones where someone ends up liking the shamed chubby person for who they are and finds them cute, but then they ALWAYS ALWAYS ALWAYS have this transformation where they get to end up being skinny after like the hot guy liking them was the magical wand they needed to get in shape. I want the bottom to stay chubby and they live happily ever after with hot sex. (I was so fucking sad when the bottom in Alpha Trauma magically got a bamf metabolism by presenting as an omega. He was so dang cute and little and chubby as a kid. I had been looking forward to seeing him equally cute and chubby as an adult )