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This was really good, heavy on the adventure tho, no much romance imo.
I loved the MC she's so funny and fearless, the love interest is really cute, and I really liked that she was the dominant one, he was rather shy and sweet
I feel like we could've had a better closing to some characters.. specially her ex fiance, he used some weird powers out of nowhere and was never talked about again haha
But overall it was very entertaining, something y really loved was that she kept her goal of leaving and not forgiving her father.