Hi, I’m trying to get into writing comics so I’m looking for a one-shot that I can ”copy” the plot of for practice (obv won’t get published anywhere), does anyone have recommendations?
I have a couple limitations and I’m sorry in advance for being so picky, but that’s also why I need help:
- The premise can’t be ”too” Japanese aka something that wouldn’t work in a western setting, such as delinquents or love letter confessions
- Similarly, a plot that hinges on homophobia; it still exists where I live but not in a way that would seriously impact the plot, so it would feel a bit odd if a character was being shunned at his job for being gay (we take workplace discrimination very seriously)
- Preferably not fantasy
- The plot can’t be dependent on sex since I won’t draw it (for now)
- Preferably not a couple that’s already dating, since I want to improve at writing people getting together or who are falling in love
- No incest or non-con or anything like that. And no prostitution!!
I’m willing to sacrifice one or two of these if it’s hard to find something that fits. :’)
The artstyle doesn’t matter since I’ll be drawing in my own style regardless. I only care about plot right now
Personally I hated this one, the MC has such a nasty personality and like I get it, you don’t like this guy, but the whole thing about wanting to have power over the uke and to make him submit to humiliate him… It’s not for me. It feels like the uke never ”wins” anything in this and is just kind of made to to along with the seme’s wishes, and like sure, he physically enjoys it and all, but the dynamic really isn’t to my tastes.
Shame because I’m not usually one to turn away a cheesy porno one-shot involving a delinquent character
glad we all agree that the bj was really out of left field lmao
a kiss really would’ve been enough, i had the feeling this entire chapter that ’aw, the last chapter was so much better’ idk i was hoping for a better resolution TT
Hiyori is soooo cute I think it’s so nice to see him fall first and to it so earnestly…… I wonder what Mukai is gonna think of his confession hehe I hope he doesn’t reciprocate right away and rushes it
Y’all are soooooo overdramatic about this one. I thought it was super clear that he would get together with Karam since he never once seemed to get over him or veer in any other direction…. I also llove Junseo but honestly I think it was an ending that made sense and that it’s unfair to treat this series as though it is horrible garbage that isn’t worth reading
BL aside I think a lot of these people need to join a union bc wdym your colleagues can just berate you and call you useless
guys she’s cringey and poorly adjusted to society and lacks tact but she’s not an ”evil, backstabbing bitch” come on… who is she even backstabbing here, she hasn’t met his lover…. she’s super cringe but she’s not evil