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Im trying so hard not to be a whiny little hater because I know the author and the artist put so much of their time, effort and energy into this and God the quality is insane its really good if not for the fact that the pacing is all over the place and is too rushed most of the chapters are just back to back fighting and the flashbacks are nice but it doesnt add anything to the build up of the plot and character itself. Also its kind of messy there’s no surprise element that makes you like anticipate the character because it all feels so rushed at the early stage of the arc the premise and world building itself is good reminds me of really popular fantasy novels like red rising but somehow the fact that the story is all over the place and there’s no widthrawn suspense makes this kind of boring and dragging I really really want to LOVE this series because it had sm potential and I won’t give up on it yet I love some of the characters they just need a little element of secrecy to them I mean if they do it like how killer peter does the suspense it would automatically feel so much better to anticipate on what’s going to happen next I think they like whole pack jabbed all the characters into our face for like one arc and it ruins that suspense and anticipation i feel like they just need better pacing and flow I’m still looking forward to it but as of now 42 chapters in i’m kinda bored anyways if yall finished reading this yap thanks for listening to my ted talk LOL