
I don't understand the thought process behind this chapter, he wants to make it seem like they took haesoo bcs of the debt but at the same time he scattered condoms and her panty all over the floor? to what? make him jealous? why would he be jealous when he's probably thinking he graped her bcs she couldn't pay off the debt? I was liking this so far despite the ML being a red flag himself but this is just such a poor execution of the plot. They had to choose between making it seem like haesoo moved on or she was in danger and they chose both and decided to execute it badly, could've just done the classic of him walking in on them doing the deed just like how haesoo found out smh.

I feel bad but for Ricardo, he genuinely loves Bianca now but I truly understand why Bianca is doing this, I mean I'd be scared shitless myself if a book suddenly pops out of nowhere and in that book I died, not to mention the events in the book literally happens and just when she's supposed to be relieved thinking she could finally have Ricardo now and live happily, the story changes again and the girl that's supposed to be the FL becomes the villainess and literally poisons her, both route literally ending with her dying now who wouldn't want to avoid that. Usually this type of trope annoys me but I'm quite invested to see what happens to them, I like both the characters and honestly their so cute together and not to mention how Lala is practically their daughter now! (*´˘`*)♡

the FL despite wanting to have some backbone she is iterally weak asf, she wants to avoid a man she knows for sure is a man whore but ends up being closer to him and even slept with him after 10 chapters in, blushes literally almost every panel to the point red/pink could've been her skin color, now moving on to the ML who we don't understand his personality yet other than him being a man whore who we've probably seen kiss
different girls than get a glimpse of what kind of character he is and now the ex, who honestly for me isn't so necessary bcs he isn't even introduced properly yet he's supposed to be an antagonist of this story, literally a chapter of FL just having flashbacks of her time with him would've been enough OVERALL the plot isn't solid, could've been better executed and the characters lack depth like they lack way too much depth considering there's 17 chapters in, I mean that's literally enough to lay the foundation of what kind of character the characters are, not asking all of them but atleast just the FL since the story revolves around her but instead we get a pipsqueak who enjoys running away and blushing but maybe it's too early to have a final opinion so I might let this marinate for a while and see if my opinion changes

I honestly believe Bansis is a great character, just the arrogance of being a direct descendant and being the prodigy of his generation took over him too much. Clearly he cared enough for Lucia to tell her she was crazy for choosing to duel with him knowing full well she'll get hurt, it's honestly sad he's around bad influences one of those mainly being his father and his swordsmanship teacher, I hope there's a character development but it's too early to tell as after all Lucia's plan is to take revenge against the Lordbell family, that includes Bansis so there might be no character development but like I said, who knows how the story will steer
DANG why do they keep interrupting her like that, please leave her the heck alone man. The girl just wants to be happy DANG