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I get the gist of the plot but at times I'm lost about some things the characters say. Their will either be a typo or an out of character comment, or even the names of the characters will change? Is it Neil or Nilla?
In the 5th chapter, the mc is predictably announced to have won the contest, but she's like "No!!! my prediction has never been wrong before..." ??? girl?? isn't this what u were expecting/aiming for?? whats going on