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I marinated this for a long time hoping it was gonna be one of those masterpieces but I was kinda annoyed with the mc and ml most of the time.
1. The mc was NOT suspicious at all about that message. After all he's been through, someone like him should've been more cautious and at least have back up plans before going to that isolated place to drop that 1b won money. But naur. And see where that led him? To another situation where he would need the ml's help and almost endangering him too.
2. Correct me if I'm wrong but ml raped the mc a few times too. Or perhaps i understood it wrong and the mc also consents. Idunno.
3. There were some parts that weren't really justified or could've been elaborated or answered but maybe the side stories will make up for it. Like the part where he thought the sitting at the couch was deja vu. I guess the smuts were more prioritized Sorry but I like well-placed smuts so I kinda had expectations after all the waiting I did.
4. The side stories uploaded was just the main story in a different setting. I was hoping it had a different plot tho. Sorry for the expectations