beta
see 5 steps ahead. but her behavior is bordering on brainless. she is on the run & doesn't wanna get caught by her father & brother's, yet as she gotta get close to where they r (cause she needs the ingredient's to cure her grandmother). so why not cover ur-self?!? chop that f*ckin hair off or wear a wig. but nahhhh
same with her final message to her friends. they have come to the logical conclusion. but she doesn't have a plan for anything. wishing to see them from a far was cute & all but logically would backfire, as it has. cause she doesn't plan ahead - anyone with a brain would figure that out. even now she has no solution, other then to sit there mute & wide eyed. i have no patience for a damsel in distress that needs constant rescuing. idk how this will work out but given how the MC has turned out i really don't care to keep reading & see...