Idk if it’s immaturity or what, but I don’t understand why someone would take even more time to turn what is supposed to be translated into formal language and change it to informal language seemingly inappropriate for the circumstances happening in the story, not to mention they’re not words the characters would be saying anyways. It was honestly hard for me to understand what was happening and to enjoy the story.
Idk if it’s immaturity or what, but I don’t understand why someone would take even more time to turn what is supposed to be translated into formal language and change it to informal language seemingly inappropriate for the circumstances happening in the story, not to mention they’re not words the characters would be saying anyways.
It was honestly hard for me to understand what was happening and to enjoy the story.