It was honestly a nice heartwarming story, though I think the ending needs some more work. I hoped to see more of their relationship after that last part but it really just left us hanging, I just wish there was an extra chapter that would help close their love story. Overall I think the art was amazing, you wrote the characters well and the whole setting was just beautiful. Though I personally think the story would have more to give if they both explored more about each other. The ending was a good close but I believe it could be better (╥_╥)
It was honestly a nice heartwarming story, though I think the ending needs some more work. I hoped to see more of their relationship after that last part but it really just left us hanging, I just wish there was an extra chapter that would help close their love story. Overall I think the art was amazing, you wrote the characters well and the whole setting was just beautiful. Though I personally think the story would have more to give if they both explored more about each other. The ending was a good close but I believe it could be better (╥_╥)