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Bro I love this type of story, but Dojae didn’t suffer enough. Bro didn’t even grovel, MC just folded immediately. Dojae literally slept around after saying he would only date MC and that just doesn’t get brought up directly. Just the one time he was caught kissing some freshman girl. DOJAE LITERALLY FOUND A NEW GUY ASAP AFTER THEIR FINAL DATE. and MC took him back LMAO. Bro grow a back bone.
bro i agree i couldn't even finish the story i was being ragebaited every chapter
THANK YOU. I stopped reading after he couldn’t understand why MC was up the kept sleeping around after they were going on dates. Like nah man I’m opting out lol.
I was deciding whethere to read it or not. Thank you for informing me, I WON'T be reading this WTF
I think this is severely under explained. The whole reason as to why Dojae even did that was because he didn't know. He doesn't understand empathy and lives life logically. To him, they were not dating and thus didn't have to be exclusive. Everything is explained so wonderfully. Their relationship is so realistic, it's a great read.
Wrong. Dojae says “I’ll only be with you” while they do their limited dates. So he lied regardless of his understanding for their relationship. He knew MC loved him but still slept around, he knew he wanted more with MC but still let him leave after breaking his heart, then he tries to move on with a new guy IMMEDIATELY after. And MC still goes crawling back to him… it’s pathetic
This is literally just mid smut with a “story” to provide fluff around the smut. I was excited because of the art, but this was lame.
Well it is a short story after all but the author did well with what she can in my opinion I love her. So please don’t hate her
My criticism just comes from a place of dissatisfaction. I LOVED Define the Relationship so I went looking for more, but this was severely lacking in all departments but the art.
Characters had no development, plot was non existent, “conflict” was solved in like 2 panels.
I understand it’s a short story, but most yaois are this length and still provide more than smut.
Define the Relationship did all of those things PERFECTLY.
Oh I truly couldn’t agree more but it’s only 5 chapters so technically it wasn’t enough to fit in character development that would satisfy any of us but hopefully she’ll make another good story soon that’ll be just as good as define the relationship
then go read those other yaoi. god forbid an author want to do a simple plot for once. just because they wrote a 100+ chapter story once, they have to that for the rest of their career? foh
I read a ton of others :) how was I supposed to know this one would be so lacking unless reading it. I don’t know why you are taking my opinion so harshly
"how was I supposed to know this one would be so lacking unless reading it" because it's 5 CHAPTERS. are you blind? did you expect to read a Hamlet-esque story within these 5 chapters? or maybe you expected Pride and Prejudice? you complain that this feels lacking after reading Define the Relationship, but 1. DTR was NOT written by this author, she's only the *artist* for the manhwa adaptation so of course the storytelling is different and 2. this story is 5 chapters long, DTR is 100+. did it ever come to you that comparing these two stories is completely idiotic? you read a 5 ch story and then were surprised it didn't have some crazy plot or character development?
it's incredibly irritating to read a wholesome, simple short story just to go to the comments and find someone comparing it to a story of a completely different wavelength and then claim this was "lame". this story works perfectly fine for what it is intended to be, it's not the author's fault you're dumb.
Again, why are you so mad? It’s my OPINION and you’re calling me an idiot. I’ve literally said that I’ve read stories THE SAME LENGTH that have more plot and development than this.. are you ignoring me or can you not read? I said I read it for the art and was unsatisfied with the story. How can it be so wholesome if it was literally just smut lol?
I didn’t expect this story to be the same level as DTR, I just expected it to have a real plot, my bad for that?? Thanks for calling me dumb over an online forum though, it’s weird to see someone unable to handle a real opinion.
i'm mad because your comment is stupid. this story is fine, you are the weirdo who expected this story to be like DTR - don't even try to deny it, you literally compared them in your comment.
oh i know you have a "real opinion" (whatever the fuck that means), i'm just letting you know your opinion is dumb as fuck.
Stay mad then