Siuol :3 want to read (All 89)
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Im at Ch.151 and Idk if the Author keeps forgetting details from 30 chapters back cuz why did Lord change appearance from a black fat like incarnation of gluttony to a ball of light. It was clear that "Demigod" was a singular entity but all of a sudden the author seems to have decided that it was a group of entities? What about the Illininum, was that not a necessary condition for Demigods to not be subjected to God's punishment, and that production was extremely limited and majority of the products fell to Frey's hands but somehow the Demigods are running around freely and in huge numbers too. Not to mention that Frey somehow needed to fight Eliah to become a 9 star but Frey was already a 9 star before in his past life so he should have already known how to become one. The way they scrapped the whole Eliah being the last hope so fast and added in Paragon which was a group more secretive than the Trauman rings who somehow conveniently had the ArcLich which was not interested in outside manners and the 11th magic tower as members lmao. Idk what direction theyre going for atp
Got to like 191 and its even worse. Somehow Iris was actually the one who connected Lucas and Frey to free him but girl, in the earlier chapter she was shocked that Lucas was finally back. Make it make sense.
i mean if you think about it there's a difference between planning for it and seeing it with your eyes. Im pretty she was shocked and happy that he was WELL and not dying yknow? it does make sense. she only gave lucas a chance to be freed from the abyss, she wasnt able to control what comes after that and she cant do anything reckless cuz the lord might notice her using his authority
Anyone know a BL with a plot where a couple breaks up because one is too cowardly and afraid of being gay in this society?
It was this RPG fantasy adventure story where the first arc doesn't focus around leveling up and fighting monsters and collecting money but rather trading in the stock market. I know, very odd for an ROG but it is quite realistic. I forgot the reason why but I think he was planning to buy a mountain or sumn?
Its interesting enough to keep you reading, deserves its 9.4 rating.
If they actually fixed the plot holes and had consistent power scaling and writing, this would easily reach a 9.6. not to mention the different authorities and entities not aligning well with their constellations, and whats with the random game systems mixed in. Everything after the first 50 chapters feels like an afterthought that somehow happened to mix in well enough to be enjoyable.
The story in itself has a good foundation and a great premise, but the worldbuilding and writing really failed to keep up. Still decent enough though if you aren't too keen on the details and just enjoy a good read. (づ￣ ³￣)づ