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The daughter of a well-known family, Xiao Yao, died of a serious illness, upon awakening she discove...
Wtf is this. It was all okay at first, tho plot at first was the cliche reincarnation plot. Up to the ch100 or something or around that, the plot escalated really quickly. It happened so fast it was like the flash clapping or something. Literally from the original cliche plot to another plot that is really similar to that one manhwa where a villain protag wants to rest. The transition of the plot isn't even smooth, it was all over the place. Some characters as well were introduced but later on disregarded without them even making of any use to the whole story, like why even introduce them and introducing the special magic club or some shi when you're not even going to integrate it to the whole story? Atleast make it of use. Too much characters and unnecessary build ups, u think that that character is relevant to the whole plot but they'll just be giving the protag an object and they'll just run off somewhere. I really thought that there was something going good when i was confused on the protag's sister plotting something, it was all so mysterious, but all of it was in vain, turns out it was just the author not knowing abt what to do next and how to develop the story. There still alot of chinese comics out there that has a more organized plot than this but although it's all too confusing to read, i still want to see it until the end to find out what the author's mind will produce as the ending, assuming that the manhua is not cancelled. Just give it a read but prepare for a rollercoaster of thoughts.