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Honestly I really liked this one. First and foremost the art is literally so breathtaking. It's aesthetically pleasing, the characters have great proportion and body lines special Shu Yun's body lines since he's a dancer. The art is depecting the characters in a very delicate, elegant way. They all look so beautiful. The plot is good. Wholesome and adorable at first but there's drama towards the end. The drama isn't excessive at all. I think it was a right balance between how their relationship developed and all the hardships they encountered with it. Can I just say though that Tong Yang's family (except for grandpa and brother) they literally are such sh*tty people and they deserve a special place in hell, f*ck them I hope they rot in hell. Also side couple is very *chef's kiss*.


One thing though. Don't come at me for this
BUT am I the only one that thinks Shun Yun's long hair is atrocious. Yes Atrocious. I feel like it's literally all over the place and I just want to grab and tie it up. Worst case scenario is probably me cutting it(≧∀≦) but anyways other than that I think tying his hair would be a better idea. Some kind of a low pony or something. I just don't want it flaring out like some Bush.


Also if the reason why your here is because you want to see some dancing ballet actions with all the technicalities and taking into a much more ballet focused story then this isn't for you. BUT I recommend staying if you want a light hearted read. Something that'll keep you entertained and maybe if you want to feel single then I think your good to go with this.

I'd give this story an 8.5. I think the plot could be a little more polished and definitely they could have put more emphasis on the later parts of the story specially the time gap. 9 years is a very long time. I'd like to think that everything else is being covered in the side story though

That leads me to the question.

"is this dropped?"

It's been around 5 montgs since the last update. Maybe someone is interested on picking this up.