So like what im getting from ppl in the comments is that y'all think:
1. Consent to cnc = rpe
2. Cringe dirty talk automatically means male author
3. Women can't be horny
Like consent is the sexiest thing out there n your mad that she CONSENTED n is into it ???? Y'all mad that the ppl in the play are checking in n making sure she still wants to continue ???? That she's ultimately the one to decide when she has enough b4 the scripted end of the scene ???? Also its an ECCHI cringe dirty talk is like....part of the genre ???? N women can be cringe. As a woman im INCREDIBLY cringe. N women can be horny this isnt a "male fantasy." Some of the most insane pwp yaois and fanfics y'all gonna find were written by women. If this was written by a man at least they ain't just shoving it in thats way too prevalent in male written ecchi.