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My problem with this story is that the characters are too one-dimensional, and the plot is quite predictable. For example, Jiwon was a much better-developed character, and in BJ Alex, there was at least an element of comedy—the characters were cheekier, and even the second couple was much more interesting and exciting. I actually don’t mind toxic stories as long as the characters are mentally stimulating, sexy, and have some edge.It’s not enoug for a character to just be toxic in the stupidest way and then have a redemption arc… Her writing has declined so much, while the art became immaculate. It’s a shame—this story had the potential to be much better with this plot.