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uhhhh idk how to feel abt this, seems like the fl is not thinking logically at all :'D how could a person misunderstand so many things ??? :'D I'd be more delighted if she'd do some thinking and realize that none of the actual events (esp the villainess parts) happened, aslan is clearly not hating on her, and because she isn't acting the way a villainess is supposed to be, she's not going to die because of aslan.
i really hate the misunderstanding trope, but even more so when it's done poorly like this :'D lemme know what yall think :D