beta
this is lowkey interesting and i like smut so what more could i ask for lol. There’s definitely plot and i wasn’t expecting that ian was the phantom. I like how they’re slowly getting their happy ending but i hate how the FL has the mindset that, “i can change him” or “it’s not you, it’s me” cliche. I get how that cliche relates to this story cuz of ian’s backstory and i’m not saying that I don’t like this story but it would be nice if the FL was more of a strong women mindset. like the ML and FL would definitely be a power couple if she was. Anyways I like this story and will probably continue to read as it updates.