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Don't write a story about a protagonist reborn into the story of Cinderella, if you're just going to make up a new Cinderella . This literally didn't have to be about Cinderella, or the protag could have actually dealt with the implications of possessing the body of someone abusive. If you're going to change all the good characters into stupid and sloppy characters, and all the evil characters into secretly wise and virtuous characters, then you're not writing about Cinderellaaaaaaaaa. Brb going to rewrite Shrek, so Lord Farquaad is a misunderstood king who loves his people wholeheartedly, but this evil jackass ogre and other cruel freaks keep trying to ruin his kingdom.