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As people said the characters are so unlikable and the plot was a hot mess but I can’t shake this feeling the execution of the story itself.
The pacing, the dialogue, the art… all actually amazing. Incredible really. If the plot was tweaked in a few places then this story would be so good.
Remove the cousin aspect and make Jimin older, make Kyujin less selfish and impulsive. Even in his inner dialogue he had no reasoning on why he went back and forth until much later and even that didn’t make sense. Id go as far to say that he needed to grow a fucking back bone.
The timeskip is when he should have been living by himself and learn how to live his life not revolving around his cousin. Kyujin had no development and no sign of it.
Doyeol and Jimin almost had development and then it got twisted at the end >.>