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Seunghyun and Hojun on their own is quite enough with Seunghyun's lie about the class. They did make up quite quickly because of Hojun's considerate personality, and Seunghyun did take their classes seriously. However, I think that Seunghyun's theatre arc is lacking, as well as the execution about the whys of their break up and his resignation from theatre. It is a good addition to as to how he pulled of being a Sex teacher, but I think the author could give more substance to his ex because for me, he is just a nuisance, but not someone with a solid personality. Like, he is one-dimensional and a missed opportunity.
Maybe a little segment of heart to heart between them because Hojun is a curious person on his own and Seunghyun could explain more about why he quit theatre. Even Hojun knows how Seunghyun loves theatre. And, as someone with an acting background, Seunghyun couldve been a good teacher for Hojun, too. It adds to that extra where Seunghyun and Hojun tries cop-criminal play.
But regardless, the author did a great job with the details of Seunghyun's and Hojun's personality. Their body language and motivations are clear (just a tad deficient in Seunghyun's past) and with the author's drawing style, it makes the whole thing pop and be memorable.
★★★★