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You know……….I feel like this was too short. It was a nice read, but there was a whole lotta…..nothing?? We had the amnesia bit and then the parents reunion bit. A lotta times, when I finish a good one, I want more of it—I want it to keep going a little while longer. With this one, it’s the same thing BUT I want it to keep going because I didn’t get anything from it. It was like eating two full plates of food, yet it doesn’t fill you up and you’re left hungry for more.

I will say that I like the art for this one more than the first one. At first, I was skeptical bc of Vasya’s eye color but it grew on me. Then with Yoon’s looks—he’s really cute and his personality shows more in his expressions in this one so I understood how men were crazy about him at the club. Chris looked better in this one too. I wish Vasya’s eyes werent so icy blue because it looked like he belonged in the movie Underworld. A nice, cool blue would have sufficed. Anyhoo, hope we get a wedding!