Hmm its okay, its good but like, at the beginning of the story, it wasnt even like she was ill. Realistically if she was so ill that she was gonna die soon, she surely wouldn't have been able to move right?
And maybe cause I wanted some more angst bhahah, I thought she was a bit to energetic and happy for someone about to die.
But its still an interesting read. Im reading it more for the hunka hunka dragon. But no one has to know about that meheheh ლ(´ڡ`ლ)