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Sure the ending is rushed, but it was a great story regardless
I think it's kinda funny that instead of any convincing or emotional bonding he just erases all the trauma that caused people to go batshit.
I think everything makes sense except Hakuraku going to Hokkaido and the two coffins. If Sora had already killed his parents, then why tf were they there? I dunno. Only thing I don't think makes any sense.