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It’s quite obvious who the author favours which makes it being a love triangle baffling? That’s why the plot is off and going in circles. Author wants to long it out with TJ as long as possible. Not that i hate his character i just think it’s obvious the bias in the writing so why wasn’t he just the main love interest? Makes reading it jarring either way its time to get rid off one love interest and let the story move along. It’s boring now.
Such a good short story, i hope the author releases more work.