beta
I read the novel honestly there isn’t anything in there that’s original, i will give the author credit for saying the seme is a psychopath and has no empathy whatsoever but honestly they could’ve delved into his condition even more and made it more part of the story rather than just saying he has a condition that’s why he acts this way. It would gave his character that extra touch and made readers understand him much better.
The bottom has no personality, no character, little to no self worth or esteem he is pretty much a door mat from start till finish. So do not expect any character development with him. He remains passive.
The novel annoyed me because it relied very heavily on the seme being an asshole and the bottom being a clueless dimwit with no real nuances in the plot.
To me i found the novel to be very unoriginal and boring. That relied heavily on abuse etc… strip that away and there isn’t really a good plot or characters.