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this KINDA has potential but the transitions between scenes & situations are starting to get kinda weird. why does it feel like author just randomly put together infamous cliché shit and called it a day? (⊙…⊙ )
why the fuck did a date night in the market happen with tristan, the brown-haired womanizer?? that was so unnecessary lmao. the whole choosing the knight w/o the master of the house, the FL trying to pick up swordsmanship and then leaves it as soon as she tries it, the meeting in the forest and then being chased by assassins and then falling from a cliff or dropping to the falls and then ending up spending a night in the cave and then the whole short-term memory loss arc. like... tf
i liked the premise of the story, it was giving "Father, I Don't Want This Marriage" (i still haven't finished that btw) and i was willing to read it for the hell of it but... wtf is happening (╯°Д °)╯╧╧