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Tried to reread this in one go since I put this on hold last year. The first half was ok, but it became a mess on the 2nd half. I'm not sure if it was because of the translation, or the art somehow downgraded, but i just forced myself to read this until the end. I tried to ignore the fact that they grew up as siblings turned into lovers, but the plot was all over the place. No excitement nor strong emotion were felt when i read this. Especially at the end, what's the purpose of finding the true identity of Hari if it will just look rushed to end the story. I got invested at the start since she came back so i thought she will do some great exciting things on her 2nd life, but nah, there's nothing actually. Also, maybe it is just me, but some scenes or monologues were kind of cringe-y. I might have like this if I read it when I was younger.