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imo it’s a pretty interesting and good plot line but i just hate when the author goes the sexual route. like it’s literally out of nowhere. it would’ve been sm better if there was more built up tension b/w the mc and ml instead of them going straight into blowjobs and handjobs. don’t get me wrong, i’m all for smut, but sometimes it feels out of place and this story shows it. now the ml is just a player when it could’ve been way more interesting to see the development between him and the mc without resorting to sex like 10 chapters in.