beta
The Achilles heel of this story is the pacing. There is so much lore and information that is sped over or not shown. For instance, this mysterious vampire ability that unlocks the mystery behind the bad guy, this info just appears. The bad guy has like 2 chapters of appearance. However, I still did enjoy this story. 4 out of 5 for me because even with it's negatives the story was still engaging. It's just a missed opportunity but for 39 chapters, they did the best they could and I applaud them for it.
This story so damn mid when it didn't have to be. It's makes me mad how much of a missed opportunity this story is. Mid smut scenes and lazy writing. A damn shame, truly.