The Achilles heel of this story is the pacing. There is so much lore and information that is sped over or not shown. For instance, this mysterious vampire ability that unlocks the mystery behind the bad guy, this info just appears. The bad guy has like 2 chapters of appearance. However, I still did enjoy this story. 4 out of 5 for me because even with it's negatives the story was still engaging. It's just a missed opportunity but for 39 chapters, they did the best they could and I applaud them for it.
Seriously such a great read. The high point of this story is the writing, specifically the dialogue and chemistry between the characters. They felt like real people. I enjoyed the way the author demonstrated the insecurites that can exist in relationships between friends, family, and lovers. And they did that with only 60 chapters, something I've seen other stories not accomplish with 4-5 seasons. It was also a treat to watch the art transform from chapter 1 to chapter 60. My only complaint is that I wish it were longer, I know this story would have been even better. Looking forward to more work from this author.
Yeah this story is just pure second hand embarrassment. Minjun is like an incel who finally got some ass and he's so fucking embarrassing because of it. Lmaoooo like it was so hard to get through some parts of this story without cringing to death. However, I did actually like it, I imagine this will read better when the officials come out so imma wait for those.
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Has to be the BEST short manwha I've read in a long time, the way this could be top 5 best BL if they ever did more with this! Great art, funny and interesting characters and such good dialogue, I want moreeee.
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Love the main couple can't wait for more but I truly love an enemies to lovers plot so I'm extra exited for the side couple to become a thing. I just hope we don't only get a few chapters and instead get a true story from them.
Okay, so was it only me who thought he was gonna become a teacher? I felt like that was the whole set up with the kids and him finally locking in to school. A little disappointed with the ending also didn't think we needed 60+ chapters for this. It's a cute story though.
I don't think the ppl who commented below actually finished the story because once you get to the end, the "hate" u have for certain characters genuinely changes. One of the most unique stories I've read in a long time. Pls give this a chance and open your mind and heart to these characters, it's so worth it.
Why does Hayoon not have a back bone and perpetually in a state of distress?. Truly the most unattractive thing about this story is Hayoon's ability to do nothing for himself but make everything worse. It's not endaring nor cute that he takes the hardest route everytime. It's draining and childish. But even if I were to ignore Hayoon's flaws, this story is so poorly written that I'm genuinely appalled by the praise you guys are giving it. You don't even have good art to fall back on because the artist clearly struggled with anatomy throughout the story. Just cringe, plot holes, and bad sex scenes every other page. (Side couple was cute tho) Like this is a 2-3 at best.
The art's ass, the story telling is ASS. Only redeeming thing about this is that it's a quick read.
I really don't recommend this. The description of this story really oversells this story. 80 percent of it is them chilling in college slowly becoming lovers with their 1 demionsional friends in the background rooting them on. Every conflict is so surface level which sucks because there were some interesting ideas here. It's enjoyable in the sense that the couple is cute and the art is really good. But tbh, I think a lot of us continued to read because the art was nice to look at. That 2nd season is a complete shit-show, and so many stupid things pop up that I contemplated cutting my loses many, many times, but I had to see this through. Anyway, do not get tempted by the art or description, you WILL waste your time. (Also I think the rich dad/engagement is typical and overdone but would have been a better ending conflict than that other shit)