This story has a lot of potential: +guideverse with a bit of omegaverse (heat/saturation), +deeper guideverse lore sith the cup analogy, +mixing in royalty, +sprinkling some experimentation trauma, +a strong bottom and a yearning top, +interesting side characters, +mostly action and drama rather than just porn, +a good variety of character designs (characters dont suffer from same face syndrome), +a dungeons storyline...
Unfortunately -the pacing feels off, -some of the emotional connections are very childish and/or lack more development and -the drawing style is OK at most
Most of the manhwa I read that adapted from novel always feel like this, feel like it have potential but it feel like something is missing or the pacing is off T_T. But not all manhwa of course.
Most of the manhwa I read that adapted from novel always feel like this, feel like it have potential but it feel like something is missing or the pacing is off T_T. But not all manhwa of course. SweetCaramel
In this case it is mostly the artist and editing team in charge of properly portraying the scenarios, add any necessary additional segments to make everything more cohesive... The artist might be relatively new to drawing, idk... But i agree, the majority of the stories are not bad but the art is usually lacking ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
Nothing much happens but at the same time A LOT happens So many emotions stransmited through the few panels and barely any coherent conversations... Awesome work from the artist and whole team
Im sure the story is somewhat good, but i cant stand child looking bottoms, he looks like a 10 year old, 20 year old twinks dont look like that, and even if we were talking about an effeminate looking twink, they STILL dont look like that... Just not for me
This story has a lot of potential:
+guideverse with a bit of omegaverse (heat/saturation), +deeper guideverse lore sith the cup analogy,
+mixing in royalty,
+sprinkling some experimentation trauma,
+a strong bottom and a yearning top,
+interesting side characters,
+mostly action and drama rather than just porn,
+a good variety of character designs (characters dont suffer from same face syndrome),
+a dungeons storyline...
Unfortunately
-the pacing feels off,
-some of the emotional connections are very childish and/or lack more development and
-the drawing style is OK at most
Most of the manhwa I read that adapted from novel always feel like this, feel like it have potential but it feel like something is missing or the pacing is off T_T. But not all manhwa of course.
In this case it is mostly the artist and editing team in charge of properly portraying the scenarios, add any necessary additional segments to make everything more cohesive... The artist might be relatively new to drawing, idk... But i agree, the majority of the stories are not bad but the art is usually lacking ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭