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The reserved Kasumi and the lively, popular Kyousuke have been friends since elementary school. Kyou...
Nicely packed story(calm)
-pacing
-cutting arc?and arranging chapters(can be used for 2 chapter ref)
Maybe bcs the formula was they had a history together and was told by flashbacks and internal monologue. It was a lot
Felt like it was long bcs their personality and background is evident too
It's cliche plot but nicely delivered by story telling
Sex in the middle was abrupt but was used as a plot device for uke to progress the story
End up addressing seme internalized homophobia