Nobody in Particular v3

The world building could definitely use some work but the plot is intriguing and the romance is good for dark fantasy. I like that the story shows the ML's dilemma in wanting to covet Raza while not controlling her the same way her brother does. I like how sweet the two are with each other but my heart hurts so bad for Raza and I hope we see her getting some justice or retribution. There are certain things about the setting that confuses me but the story's main focus is the romance and defeat of the brother and I think those parts are moving at a fair pace.

I love the art and smut but I'm pleasantly surprised by how serious the story takes itself. Both Aaron and Yujin have their own traumas to work through. Yujin suffers from low self-confidence and has trauma from being physically abused by his father, which manifests in various forms. Aaron is learning to break away from his machiavellian upbringing while recognizing his desire and jealousy to be feelings of romance and not ownership. The art is stunning and I really like the direction the story is heading towards. I just hope they continue building the romance and break down the economic barriers between the two, as that's where a lot of Yujin's self confidence issues lie. I want to see more of an equivalent relationship between the two where the power dynamic only exists in the bedroom.