beta
I am loving the story right now. The plot seems to be well thought out and the characters are likable.
However, I can't help but notice that the story seems to be really rushed in some parts and have gaps in others. Like I was totally into the whole 3 majors thing but suddenly mc is in class 5, the worst class? Right after mc is literally praised by every single teacher to be an unprecedented genius? I feel like I missed something there but idrk.
Also regarding the fragments of heros, they foreshadowed that the fragments react when the original hero comes in touch with their fragment. Then after that, Kyle comes along and touches his fragment, causing a huge reaction and sending everyone into the heros world. Excellent story telling, wonderful suspense. But like where is the aftermath? There was literally no mention of the incident after that, even though it was definitely a huge deal. And no suspicions abt why fragment reacted with mc. Not even an explanation on why it shouldn't be a huge deal. Just abrupt ending of the arc.
It feels like I'm being served a 5 star 8 course meal, but midway eating they skip from course 3 to course 5, and yes I'm enjoying the food but I'm also wondering where did course 4 go and will it ever come. Also with this pace, it's like I'm being rushed to gobble up every dish they serve, forced to eat the next course before being able to savour the taste of the previous one.
Will I still eat the full meal though? Absolutely
(Also if anyone can explain to me the class 5 thing plsss tell me I'm dying to know, just in case I actually skipped a chapter/panel or 2 by accident)